Opinion on these songs?

they're remixes to drake's marvin's room  paris morton music
i had to lower the pitch for the video won't get taken down
doesn't sound professional? well i'm usin a rock band mic lol(still
legible)
i'm looking more for feedback on the lyrics so please forget the
production
if u don't like it explain y? dont worry i'm my harshest critic ha

enjoy :P
marvin's room remix http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GWTy5EVFO14

paris morton music remix http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fb69lNwNAq8